Posts from the “Novel Writing” Category

Novel Writing – The Understory

Novel writing requires a complex set of skills ranging from plotting to dialogue to knowing everything that will happen on the page, before it happens. In November 2011, I wrote a novel for National Novel Writing Month. The experience itself remains unlike any other I’ve ever completed, participated in, done.

I struggled because I had not fleshed out what I thought was the back story. But, in fact, what I had not done was flesh out the understory. Steven Pressfield describes the understory as

…the architecture that undergirds and supports the surface story.

Pressfield goes on to describe examples from contemporary movies and greek tragedies on how the understory comes through to the surface of the story. I appreciate how he exhorts writers to reveal the understory through dialogue or direct action rather than flashbacks or voice over narration. Or the dreaded Prologue which now seesm to inhabit every mystery now being published in the U.S. I have concluded that authors include Prologues because they can’t or wont’ incorporate into the surface story. But I digress.

I’ve learned that novel writing may best be served by knowing as much as possible about such things as understory and backstory. Pressfield describes the difference as:

Backstory explains a character’s individual past and hints at her motivation. Understory is the story-architecture supporting the surface story.

Pottering about a novel results in a lot of written words and pages and some very huge holes in the manuscripts. I look forward to writing the understory for a novel I am working on now. Armed with Pressfield’s suggestions, the next draft will be measurably better.

Novel Writing: Completion

Color logo for nanowrimo

For the first twenty-three days of November I wrote more words than in the previous two years, more than 51,000 words, actually. As part of national novel writing month, I began the novel on November 1 and finished on November 23.

With my outline in hand, I began and wrote everyday. I found the process exhilirating and difficult. The sentences poured forth, sometimes 5,000 words combined over two two-hour writing periods. At times it felt like a weakling’s attempt to control a fire hose on full throttle. During my most productive weekend I wrote over 8,000 words.

Since shutting down Facebook and Twitter my ability to focus has increased. As a writer it has to. Without focus I skim the surface. Without focus I possessed no ability to complete this novel. But even with some hard focus ability, I hovered too close to the surface.

But that is why all writers rewrite. The first is just simply to get the words down.

What I am grateful for is this: both the time and the desire to write this novel. I am also grateful for a supportive partner and for the newly found willingness and ability to stay in my seat to keep writing.

While focus isn’t everything in writing, I think it’s about 65 to 70 percent of the game winning strategy.

Novel Writing: Hard Focus

a screen shot of my novel in Scrivner

Cal Newport at Study Hacks writes about the value of hard focus to achieve anything worthwhile.

He quotes from Haruki Murakami’s memoir What I Talk About When I Talk About Writing (page 77):

If I’m asked what the next most important quality is for a novelist, that’s easy too: focus — the ability to concentrate all your limited talents on whatever’s critical at the moment. Without that you can’t accomplish anything 

With my outline as my guide I’ve made considerable progress on this novel. More than I thought possible. Without the hard focus Newport and Murakami describe my words could not have become sentences and those sentences, paragraphs.

Hard focus opens up a place in my mind that resembles one of those windows described by speculative fiction writers that allows mortals to time travel. If the window closes, they are stuck in another time period, with no way to get home.  I’ve concluded that I don’t like it when the window closes.

By writing every day with hard focus I keep that window open and the words come. I do not wish to convey any hocus-pocus about my process. I don’t believe there is much mystery to writing. Read well and broad, pay attention to the world around me and write every day. That’s not mystery, that’s hard work brought into existence by hard focus.

Somehow since my last attempt at writing a novel in 2001 I have managed to discipline myself to write in periods of about 90 minutes. This weekend I intend to write past the 90 minute window. As I reflect on this path I on, which may very become the career I wish to master, I am awed at both the simplicity and difficulty of hard focus.

I’m also grateful for a life in which I can focus hard on a novel.

How does hard focus work in your life?

Novel Writing: The Novel Outline

I’m well on my way with writing manuscript I’m calling “My First Novel.”

Scrivner is the software I’m using. I’m almost 10% towards my goal of 50,000 words. I  have attempted in the past to write a novel and failed. Without an outline I rambled. The plot suffered as did character development.

This time I have an outline. Boy, what a difference an outline makes. For me I now have a map directing me along particular plot lines. By having plot points in place, I’m free to write below the surface of things.

I’m very lucky that I have been willing to let myself make another attempt at a novel. I see now that the earlier novel suffered not because I’m a loser but because I had not created the structures I needed to succeed. One structure I need for success is the novel outline.

Who knew?